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Harfang is a webcomic I am doing.
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Read in french : [link]
Read in english : MangaMagazine [link] or Smackjeeves [link]
Read in korean : [link]

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ENGLISH TRANSLATION
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My english is bad, don't hesitate to correct my grammar.
Thank you ! ^__^

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~teascribe Sep 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
"Why do not go to see" isn't technically correct. It could be put as:

1. "Why don't we go and see?"
(Since the verb "do" is there, a noun needs to come after it.)
or
2. "Why not go and see?"
(If you eliminate the verb "do", then you don't need a noun afterward.)

"Do" is called an auxiliary verb when it's used in a question. What's going on in the sentence is called "subject-auxiliary inversion." This is normal for most questions, but the grammar involved is slightly tricky.

Wikipedia has an English grammar article on using "do," and it's helpful: [link]

Also, saying "go to see" isn't right either, but "go and see" is. This video should explain it better and more thoroughly: [link]

(And on another note, nice comic! I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next.)
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*auroreblackcat Sep 18, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you for your help and explanations. ^__^
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~Malusdraco Sep 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
great page!
one thing though in the 3rd panel down
it says: "why do not go to see?"
which works technically but would read easier as
"why not go and see?"
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*auroreblackcat Sep 18, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you for your help ! ^v^
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`TouchedVenus Sep 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
LOL so cute. Beautiful work on this page. I love the panel layout and line art is gorgeous. :D
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~AuroraArt Sep 17, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Awesome work, aurore!
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*Feliane Sep 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
"Don't argue !" : quel macho... 2 claques, oui ! Pauvre Lynette ^^'
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